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A mission gone south, team mates dead or missing, and a mage on a rampage. At the verge of death, Thressa, spirit of magic, takes a sudden interest in me.
This is a re-edit of a previous story of mine by the same name. (I told ya I'd do it. XD) The story stayed the same, but I improved on some of the descriptions and word choices a lot. Danielle helped be my grammar Nazi (because I really do need one), so she gets credit too. XD
This is a re-edit of a previous story of mine by the same name. (I told ya I'd do it. XD) The story stayed the same, but I improved on some of the descriptions and word choices a lot. Danielle helped be my grammar Nazi (because I really do need one), so she gets credit too. XD
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Thanks Greyraven. ^_^ I'm really happy you enjoyed this. The people at Critique Circle weren't quite so positive, but ah well.
On another note, I am going to be doing NaNo too when it starts up in a week. I'm hoping to learn a lot from writing without my inner editor harping at me.
On another note, I am going to be doing NaNo too when it starts up in a week. I'm hoping to learn a lot from writing without my inner editor harping at me.
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