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Rarity's Christmas Carousal (A Christmas Carol Parody)
Tired from a long night's work, Rarity takes a quick nap in preparation for her friend's annual Hearth's Warming Eve feast. She is then visited by 3 spirits in a dream, bent on teaching her the importance of sharing the feast with others, rather than gobbling it up all to yourself.
8K word story, long read ahead.
Goodness, I'm super exhausted, and this really was a bothersome story to write. Though, as I was revising it, I guess it's not as much of a disappointment as I originally thought. It's super difficult to write about mega blobs, and I still need more practice with it. Sorry for not going too in detail with Rarity's larger size ;). I'm sleepy AF and I kinda want to finish this story on Christmas Day XD. Well, here it is.
Merry Christmas everyone! Hope it's a good one :3
8K word story, long read ahead.
Goodness, I'm super exhausted, and this really was a bothersome story to write. Though, as I was revising it, I guess it's not as much of a disappointment as I originally thought. It's super difficult to write about mega blobs, and I still need more practice with it. Sorry for not going too in detail with Rarity's larger size ;). I'm sleepy AF and I kinda want to finish this story on Christmas Day XD. Well, here it is.
Merry Christmas everyone! Hope it's a good one :3
Category Story / Fat Furs
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If I wrote the word "legs" specifically, then I need to fix that. Usually I use that word to describe hooves, mostly for the "thin" part of the definition, to denote how tiny they are compared to the rest of the body.
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/32793957/ . Like in this image, how Rarity's hooves are much smaller compared to the rest of her legs XD. I love tiny little hooves/paws or huge fat bodies.
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/32793957/ . Like in this image, how Rarity's hooves are much smaller compared to the rest of her legs XD. I love tiny little hooves/paws or huge fat bodies.
Ah, I see! Usually I see spindly used to describe legs, and I guess mentally I thought "hooves=legs". Guess I need to read a little more closely.
Something I forgot to mention was that I really liked how Rarity subverts the dreams she has and eats everything instead. Great creative twist on the original story.
Something I forgot to mention was that I really liked how Rarity subverts the dreams she has and eats everything instead. Great creative twist on the original story.
You'd be correct in most cases ;) . But yeah, fat legs, small hooves/paws/feet XD, all spindly like little twigs stuck into a watermelon XD.
Aww, glad you liked that x3. I thought it'd be hilarious for something like that to happen. Really wanted to make the Luna part way better, but was just super tired. We'll see if I can improve it through revisions in the next couple days.
Aww, glad you liked that x3. I thought it'd be hilarious for something like that to happen. Really wanted to make the Luna part way better, but was just super tired. We'll see if I can improve it through revisions in the next couple days.
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