Neat theme! Did sound a bit busy though, lotsa upper-range sounds all coming at once. Really liked the middle section.

What DAW and plugins are you using? :}
Kinda interested because I'm doing same thing now, learning the paths of music :}

oh wow i can actually hear the song at the back of my head

that... was.. AWESOME!!!

Not bad interesting, like the slight orchestral tone to the piece, its sound seems varied, a bit clashing in sound around 1:15 or just too anythings going off at once, but it is put together again in the last 8 seconds or so. Not bad, expect to hear more in the future.

Very nice, Evalion also 'trys' to spell tries correctly :D

Oooh, that synth panning made me shiver ^.=.^

This is beautiful.

Your talent and expression really show through, and it's easy to sense the great potential to go further with it in you.

You and I, I think, have a similar vibe and interest in our compositions. It makes me wonder if we might work together someday. Could be good to get me recording my musics again. The only recordings I've made are very old, and the vintage of the equipment that I made them with is apparent, too. I'm a little embarrassed of the sound quality of it after listening to yours.

I posted some of it on my old account years ago:

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/416904/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/416854/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/416803/