
Category Story / Transformation
Species Chocobo
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 10.7 kB
One thing I didn't like is Corbyn took it in stride TOO well. There's no real sense of development.
Even shortly after his change he's like "I gotta sleep in a stable? I'm Okay with that, no problems sleeping at all!" and the next morning "I gotta eat greens out of a trough? Must be Wednesday.."
Kicking his old friend for making fun of him though it's really HIS fault Corbyn got stuck, sure, but his first reason is he "bad mouthed the company". So from one paragraph he's doing things because he had to, the next paragraph he's defending the honor of the company that basically enslaved him?
Little hard to wrap my mind around that. Should have been a bit more resistance and adaptation going on.
I like my transformation with a dash of Psychology, cuz people normally wouldn't transform and be okay with it, even after a few months.
Even shortly after his change he's like "I gotta sleep in a stable? I'm Okay with that, no problems sleeping at all!" and the next morning "I gotta eat greens out of a trough? Must be Wednesday.."
Kicking his old friend for making fun of him though it's really HIS fault Corbyn got stuck, sure, but his first reason is he "bad mouthed the company". So from one paragraph he's doing things because he had to, the next paragraph he's defending the honor of the company that basically enslaved him?
Little hard to wrap my mind around that. Should have been a bit more resistance and adaptation going on.
I like my transformation with a dash of Psychology, cuz people normally wouldn't transform and be okay with it, even after a few months.
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