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Enigma's Mouth - The Abyss
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It is done! Welcome to the back of Enigma’s mouth - it’s slimy, humid and incredibly blue! And below are the depths…
Follow-up to http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14299819/
and http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12697781/
This one continues it as you hang from his uvula! The drool may be draining, but as your surroundings are super slippery and filled with humid hyena breath how much longer can you hold on?
It is done! Welcome to the back of Enigma’s mouth - it’s slimy, humid and incredibly blue! And below are the depths…
Follow-up to http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14299819/
and http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12697781/
This one continues it as you hang from his uvula! The drool may be draining, but as your surroundings are super slippery and filled with humid hyena breath how much longer can you hold on?
Category Artwork (Digital) / Vore
Species Hyena
Size 1300 x 873px
File Size 866.3 kB
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Despite this sequence Enigma is still very much a useless predator and is instead being eaten by other predators the majority of the time. He will eat small rodents, some insects and micros (if they ask him nicely!), but the majority of his diet consists of junk food, spicy food and lots of cakes.
The reason he is so prey-ish and reluctant to hunt (other than me wanting him to be solely prey) is that his gag reflex is quite bad when it comes to swallowing larger squirming prey...and he is also quite timid and lazy. Hope that answered your question!
The reason he is so prey-ish and reluctant to hunt (other than me wanting him to be solely prey) is that his gag reflex is quite bad when it comes to swallowing larger squirming prey...and he is also quite timid and lazy. Hope that answered your question!
Indeed it does xD
So Enigma is pretty much harmless to creatures smaller than him. Example I could be a small human who encountered this hyena and the only way he would ever eat me if I said I could. Although creatures who are bigger than him would mostly likely eat him. I suppose that makes sense. Junk food, spicy food and cake is probably sounds like something that I'd love to go eating with too xD
So Enigma is pretty much harmless to creatures smaller than him. Example I could be a small human who encountered this hyena and the only way he would ever eat me if I said I could. Although creatures who are bigger than him would mostly likely eat him. I suppose that makes sense. Junk food, spicy food and cake is probably sounds like something that I'd love to go eating with too xD
A-am I getting sassed by X in your icon?
Haha yeah Enigma's mouth is pretty intense - squishy, slimy surfaces everywhere (except the teeth of course, stay away from those), warm thick saliva drooping down all around, hot blasts of breath - it's a strange place to be! But people seem to like it. If only Enigma was actually a predator more often XD
I will admit blue is a very alluring colour, it's so bold and mesmerising to stare at - slap that onto a maw and we have a winner! As for a continuation I'm unsure right now. There are scenes I can think of but I need to make interesting angles. Thanks though!
Haha yeah Enigma's mouth is pretty intense - squishy, slimy surfaces everywhere (except the teeth of course, stay away from those), warm thick saliva drooping down all around, hot blasts of breath - it's a strange place to be! But people seem to like it. If only Enigma was actually a predator more often XD
I will admit blue is a very alluring colour, it's so bold and mesmerising to stare at - slap that onto a maw and we have a winner! As for a continuation I'm unsure right now. There are scenes I can think of but I need to make interesting angles. Thanks though!
It's one of my favorite colors, in many of its variant shades. I mean, take myself, for instance...rather, my skunk. Ice blue eyes. They're so crisp, bright, almost glowing, and mesmerizing.
In regards to the drawing and the um...tempting subject matter of Enigma's squishy maw, I could see myself inside, laying upon that tongue, treating the whole experience like I was on the most incredible waterbed/sauna. That...actually sounds really fun, come to think of it. Er, but I digress, very nicely drawn. Also...I hear uvulas are a tourist attraction these days. I think they're kinda cute lately.
In regards to the drawing and the um...tempting subject matter of Enigma's squishy maw, I could see myself inside, laying upon that tongue, treating the whole experience like I was on the most incredible waterbed/sauna. That...actually sounds really fun, come to think of it. Er, but I digress, very nicely drawn. Also...I hear uvulas are a tourist attraction these days. I think they're kinda cute lately.
I'd probably would just let go so I could go down with the draining drool after enjoying looking at the lovely maw from the back. It us very alluring indeed and I think Enigma could use a micro dragon as part of his diet niw and then. These are turning out great, I hope to see more too, I've fav'd the previous 2 prior to this. ~
Fwah, all sorts of skills have had to be used for this one, buddy. You've had show knowledge of a part of the body which people don't normally see (and in that sense, you've had be creative yet convincing) and you've had to show that distance which, to a micro inside Enigma's throat, is rather a long way. And wow, have you done it well. If I can liken being eaten by Enigma to a story, you've written it very well. You've just got Enigma's teeth/tongue to remind the audience where the micro has just been and that fantastic job of drawing that long drop further into Enigma has us all thinking 'aahhh don't swallow me!' At least, people who'd rather not be a hyena's snack! XD (Although I'm certain that rather a few people would very much enjoy being swallowed by him). This and the maw piece you did a little while ago do spell out the journey of a micro into and through Enigma so well and the art to go along with it is even more incredible.
Yes, the art, why I'm writing this comment. Wow. If you had received a pound for every time I've said 'wow' to your art, you could probably buy Enigma mouthwash for a year! I can't get into my head just how well you draw all things vore. This sort of piece, this point-of-view piece which puts the audience into the piece almost, I think are the most effective. You've heard it from me before, this interaction of the audience with the piece is a truly mighty achievement and it's certainly an effect you exploit time and time again to absolutely wonderful result. I think what wins it for me is that perspective of the teeth and tongue versus the throat. I can clearly see that the teeth/tongue are close to me and I get that sense of dread when I look down into Enigma's throat. Honestly, it made me shiver, looking at it. There's no arguing: you've drawn this point-of-view piece as one should be drawn.
I can see you're taking my advice on board concerning the physics of liquid. Drool in general is slimy and Enigma, being the sort of character he is, could drool for Britain. That slimy texture is very well conveyed by how you've drawn the 'head' of the drool with a sort of trail behind it. That gives the drool a stretchy, almost elastic quality, but still makes it look like a genuine fluid. That is clever and it works very well! You've shown the stickiness of the drool too, having it coat the features inside Enigma's mouth/throat and drip off in that manner I just mentioned. I did highlight this as an area for improvement for you and it makes me really happy to a) see that you've taken on my advice and b) implemented what you've learned into a piece so well. I congratulate you on your efforts to work on those physics, bud. It's giving your vore pieces that extra dimension to make it even better and I'm so happy to see that I, with all my royal waffling in your comments, could provide some constructive help!
What really attracts me to this piece, aside from the vast improvement in how you draw Enigma's drool, is the colour. Enigma, inside, is pretty blue, but the extent to which you've gone ahead and lit it, shaded it, used bolder areas of blue on more exposed parts of his insides (the uvula and the walls of the throat) has made it a very pretty piece to behold. I personally struggle making one colour interesting. You definitely don't. Aside from that dirty yellow on Enigma's teeth (again, a very effective touch on your work featuring Enigma and his teeth in some way), the majority of this piece is one colour, but the diversity of shades, lights and all sorts do work so very well. I love your shading; it's dark, giving that depth I feel you'd need in a piece like this. I like how the bottom of Enigma's throat is the darkest part. There's a word for this: foreboding. Yes, that dark, gloomy depth of his throat is very foreboding and that is the cherry on the cake for me.
There's nothing I can suggest for you other than to keep up the fantastic work, buddy. You've learned from some of my comments, you've shown me such huge improvement and for definite, your skill has come to a point where I just shake my head and think 'can you get any better?' Of course the answer's yes. Art is a constant learning curve, after all, but your art, in so many respects, is so top-notch, I can only smile and say well done. This piece is tremendous and you should be really happy with it. c:
Yes, the art, why I'm writing this comment. Wow. If you had received a pound for every time I've said 'wow' to your art, you could probably buy Enigma mouthwash for a year! I can't get into my head just how well you draw all things vore. This sort of piece, this point-of-view piece which puts the audience into the piece almost, I think are the most effective. You've heard it from me before, this interaction of the audience with the piece is a truly mighty achievement and it's certainly an effect you exploit time and time again to absolutely wonderful result. I think what wins it for me is that perspective of the teeth and tongue versus the throat. I can clearly see that the teeth/tongue are close to me and I get that sense of dread when I look down into Enigma's throat. Honestly, it made me shiver, looking at it. There's no arguing: you've drawn this point-of-view piece as one should be drawn.
I can see you're taking my advice on board concerning the physics of liquid. Drool in general is slimy and Enigma, being the sort of character he is, could drool for Britain. That slimy texture is very well conveyed by how you've drawn the 'head' of the drool with a sort of trail behind it. That gives the drool a stretchy, almost elastic quality, but still makes it look like a genuine fluid. That is clever and it works very well! You've shown the stickiness of the drool too, having it coat the features inside Enigma's mouth/throat and drip off in that manner I just mentioned. I did highlight this as an area for improvement for you and it makes me really happy to a) see that you've taken on my advice and b) implemented what you've learned into a piece so well. I congratulate you on your efforts to work on those physics, bud. It's giving your vore pieces that extra dimension to make it even better and I'm so happy to see that I, with all my royal waffling in your comments, could provide some constructive help!
What really attracts me to this piece, aside from the vast improvement in how you draw Enigma's drool, is the colour. Enigma, inside, is pretty blue, but the extent to which you've gone ahead and lit it, shaded it, used bolder areas of blue on more exposed parts of his insides (the uvula and the walls of the throat) has made it a very pretty piece to behold. I personally struggle making one colour interesting. You definitely don't. Aside from that dirty yellow on Enigma's teeth (again, a very effective touch on your work featuring Enigma and his teeth in some way), the majority of this piece is one colour, but the diversity of shades, lights and all sorts do work so very well. I love your shading; it's dark, giving that depth I feel you'd need in a piece like this. I like how the bottom of Enigma's throat is the darkest part. There's a word for this: foreboding. Yes, that dark, gloomy depth of his throat is very foreboding and that is the cherry on the cake for me.
There's nothing I can suggest for you other than to keep up the fantastic work, buddy. You've learned from some of my comments, you've shown me such huge improvement and for definite, your skill has come to a point where I just shake my head and think 'can you get any better?' Of course the answer's yes. Art is a constant learning curve, after all, but your art, in so many respects, is so top-notch, I can only smile and say well done. This piece is tremendous and you should be really happy with it. c:
Once again, you did such a remarkable job on the POV with an excellent sense of shape/form to his tongue, his uvula, and the other plush-looking flesh too. You did an extrodinary job on the details of everything, the superb coloring with the vibrant hues, the lighting/shading and sheen, and even the sense of depth for the throat below was conveyed extremely well to show the abyss below the viewer. The drool came out very well for the sense of semi-transparency and overall this is beautifully done as well. Very awesome work! <3
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