Certain...behavior? OwO

I guess everyone knows what behavior it is.

"Experienced" instead of "experirnced".
However, I'm really hyped to see what will happen next :3

Can't believe I made that basic mistake, thanks for point it out~

No worries. Excited to see the next

they don't seem to be complaining THAT MUCH!

Well, I think they LOVE it~XD

Probably want more and/or wonder which of them is the king's favorite lol

the king looks so noble and so hot

The king will be pleased to hear that~XD

The typo in "experienced" is the only really big one here. The only other thing I can see is the prosper bit, which should read a little more like "Under his leadership, the kingdom has prospered even more."

Great work, your style is fantastic!

Thanks for your suggestion, I might change that line.
And I'm really need someone to proofreading for me now,. I might note you later about it if you're OK with it.

Love it art <3
Could it be that General Rude has a blind, right eye?

Yes, his right eye is blind. Glad someone notice it.XD

I have a story suggestion. Is there a way you can incorporate your exposition more naturally? As of now, it feels a bit redundant because the generals already lived said exposition with the king. And it wouldn't be necessary to tell them the past they already know and experienced. Instead, I would suggest to imply your exposition through more natural conversation. I hope this helps.

Yeah, I feel the same way. It's kind unnatural to tell the reader information this way. Thanks for the advice, thought, I will try not to do that again in the later pages.

I already like where this is going =w= a harem of generals~ <3

The idea of male harem is hot!!

Certain "behaviour", I see UwU

Ah, if you don't mind, I'd like to offer some corrections.

- "As we know, exiled because of..." needs "he was" here, so "As we know, he was exiled because of...".
- "...the coup d'état..." might be better with "...a coup d'état..." because we don't know which coup d'état happened.
- "...own army. Vowed to..." a comma might be better here and a change in verb form, so "...own army, vowing to..."
- "Prosper the kingdom even more." -> "The kingdom prospered even more." or "The kingdom has prospered even more."

Thank you for the comic! I'm looking forward for more! :D

OMG, you're such big help!! Thank you~
Actually the next pages are already finished, I just can't bring myself to translate them...

You're welcome! Glad I could help =D
Don't worry, take your time! I can help proofread if you want.

I really like the flow of the story, they have their own time with the king 😤 and i hope the king would find their secret meeting and you know what will happen next OwO

Ps. I really like your art style, your effort on doing the translation and the detailed in the drawing love it! , I will support you until the end, so i hope please continue translating 🙏and continue the story, and i am a big fan of yours 😁

the word 'Help' is misspelled i think its the fifth panel?

Hahaha, this is an important meeting!

You have got some good advice, and the English looks fine now! My only suggestion is, because 'rude' is a word in English, 'General Rude' sounds a little like a joke. Changing the spelling to 'Rood' or 'Ruud' (or something) might make it seem more like a name. I'm not sure though!

Or maybe you are making a joke and General Rude is a rude general XD

I really like these characters!

I want to know what comes next! Great, but I want to see the next page.

Kourney posted more pages at his twitter, however they are not translated, no idea whether more pages will be posted here, in English