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In a quiet village nestled deep in the mountains, a young koopa Shepherdess and younger sister of famous cartographer, Koopov, goes through a normal work day. It's not until she gets home that she discovers something very interesting...
Here's a recent story I whipped up just yesterday. *And* drew art for it! It's a concept I've been wanting to draw for months and months, an unaware micro shoe entrapment story from the perspective of the unaware norm. Conceptually, that's obviously a REALLY boring idea, because unaware's very nature is that the norm has no idea anything horny is happening. So for them they'd just be...operating as normal. Just a day in the life.
So I guess that's what the challenge was?? To try find some way to make it not so boring. That said, this is still a very boring story I imagine, you just spend a lot of time with the main character, Kootess, as she goes about her day.
This can be thought of as a kind of companion story or sister story to The Softest Prison (Link: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/34792057/ ). Essentially, it's kind of the same idea, just from a new perspective. And heck, it's even about Koopov's sister, whose name is ALSO a pun (Kootess = Portmanteau of Koopa and Giantess). One again, it takes place in the Paper Mario Universe in my kind of made-up region.
This story contains:
Paws
Micro/Macro
Perma shoe entrapment
Unaware
Mind Break
Semi Willing turned to unwilling
Crush
Sweat
Noncon
Boring Slice of Life
In a quiet village nestled deep in the mountains, a young koopa Shepherdess and younger sister of famous cartographer, Koopov, goes through a normal work day. It's not until she gets home that she discovers something very interesting...
Here's a recent story I whipped up just yesterday. *And* drew art for it! It's a concept I've been wanting to draw for months and months, an unaware micro shoe entrapment story from the perspective of the unaware norm. Conceptually, that's obviously a REALLY boring idea, because unaware's very nature is that the norm has no idea anything horny is happening. So for them they'd just be...operating as normal. Just a day in the life.
So I guess that's what the challenge was?? To try find some way to make it not so boring. That said, this is still a very boring story I imagine, you just spend a lot of time with the main character, Kootess, as she goes about her day.
This can be thought of as a kind of companion story or sister story to The Softest Prison (Link: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/34792057/ ). Essentially, it's kind of the same idea, just from a new perspective. And heck, it's even about Koopov's sister, whose name is ALSO a pun (Kootess = Portmanteau of Koopa and Giantess). One again, it takes place in the Paper Mario Universe in my kind of made-up region.
This story contains:
Paws
Micro/Macro
Perma shoe entrapment
Unaware
Mind Break
Semi Willing turned to unwilling
Crush
Sweat
Noncon
Boring Slice of Life
Category Story / Paw
Species Exotic (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 660.4 kB
Really, really fantastic. Read this a week or so ago and had to comment. This is some great storytelling. You did so much just letting the reader's imagination run away with them before we learn where things were actually going.
You had very nicely-created mood (slightly downbeat – another surprise given the setting – though not dreary) and interesting use of different creatures. You paint this world in rich detail way beyond what I might've expected going in.
I could probably go on and on about what you did right but I think you probably know already, so I won't be pesky and point at every last detail I liked (unless you want!). But again just lovely stuff. Very glad I found this.
You had very nicely-created mood (slightly downbeat – another surprise given the setting – though not dreary) and interesting use of different creatures. You paint this world in rich detail way beyond what I might've expected going in.
I could probably go on and on about what you did right but I think you probably know already, so I won't be pesky and point at every last detail I liked (unless you want!). But again just lovely stuff. Very glad I found this.
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