A little late to comment on this, I guess, but I'm honestly surprised that more people haven't faved this. You'd think that in a fandom centered around animal characters and, for some people, expressing some slight forms of animalistic traits, at least for the purpose of cuteness or something like that, this would spark more interest among people. Oh, well.

I'm kind of wondering if you would ever consider posting this in audio form, preferrably including all necessary parts of the process, as just hearing the main part of the script without any form of deepener or something probably wouldn't achieve the desired effect.

Also, if I could offer a slight bit of criticism about the way the script itself is written, I felt you might have used the phrase "you know" a little too much, or at least in places where, to me, they didn't seem to fit very well. I'm not saying it was an actual grammar error, just that when reading it, some of those instances didn't seem to fit very well, and just interrupted the flow a bit.