very good story so far

Aw I love how story/relationship focused your stories are! The building up!

Somewhere, in a bar named Linda's, a single tear rolled down her cheek.

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I saw this comment and was confused, so I had to look again. I see what you mean, made me laugh. Thanks for that :D

You're welcome.

Man Willy is a little shit, I don't wanna call it "predictable" but he's the way he is because of a suppressed upbringing with rich parents and he was bullied due to his size so that's his excuse for why he's a little shit right? Seems that way. The wolf dude is probably an asshole but you don't assault people out of nowhere nor demand complete strangers to carry your shit around with promises of compensation but then don't deliver. I don't know there a few red flags going off in my head with this character.