All I want to say is, Lumi is adorable. It was a beautiful story bud, and a pleasure to read. Your imagery and character interactions were sweet to read and imagine.

Thank you for sharing, and welcome to the writing part of the fandom. You are really talented dude, keep it up!

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!

You... You mister are such an awesome guy and I'm glad you helped me get started over here! I'm ecstatic you enjoyed it bud!

Of course I enjoyed it, its an honestly such a unique backstory to growth, explains your sonas design, and shows your sweetness.

And no thanks, you are the awesome one who wrote a great story. Cannot wait to see more by you, I'm pretty excited.

I just finished reading this and wow what an amazing first piece! The idea is inspired and your core prose structure is very solid! You remind me a lot of myself when I was getting started!

As such, I have maybe just a FEW tips here that could help to level you up (if you're interested in continuing to pursue writing of course. Which I think you should if you love it! There's a lot of great stuff to work with here).

I noticed you had moments in your story where you really let loose with the imagery; using metaphor to describe what's going on rather than telling us. For example, the sentence "Minutes turned to hours and the clear rays of sun tinted orange as the wolf kept working." really invokes some good images to give a feel for how the day is drawing on. There are a couple of places in your piece where you do this and I'd encourage you to try and do it more! Describe your symbols as "flickering like candlelight" or his body "chilling like he was dumped in a cold bath." (Those are very quick and dirty examples of course. I'm sure you could come up with better if you took the time haha) Stuff like that really gives your piece texture and REALLY draws the reader in a lot.

I have a few video tutorials from Youtube that really helped me with all this. They explained it better than I ever could haha. If you'd like me to send them your way, just shoot me a note!

But seriously, you should be proud of the work you have here! OH and of course the macro-related stuff was QUITE enjoyable~ Easily the best part, though I'm VERY VERY biased on that front haha.

Just clarifying here: when I said "if you took the time" I didn't mean anything wrong by that btw! I was just saying that my examples were very quick and not terribly good, and that I'm sure you could come up with something better.

To be honest this was pretty much a fairly quick write out of excitement, but I appreciate the feedback and am even MORE excited to keep writing more and actually spending more time on it all!

Thanks for the honesty!

The story is very funny, and the way of transformation is very unusual :D

Hehe, I can be a bit air headed at times without really thinking music on the mind and all. I'm really glad you liked the concept and got a few laughs from it though!

Firstly, Welcome!
A strong first debut!
Leading with an adorable character and an interesting concept!
Shame on the fox for leaving such a big softie behind XD

I know right! I can't believe he thought I'd hurt him ;-;

Thanks for the greeting and I'm sure there'll be more chances for people to warm up to me

I love all your descriptions! It really adds to the scene. I’m looking forward to more! ❤️

You and me both! I'm glad ya liked it.

What a nice story! Love the creativity and wholesomeness! Great job!

It's hard to be mean to people... Well, unless I know they're mean, but that's... for another day.

Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Hi ! your story is really cute, apparently you're new to the macro/micro fandom? in this case welcome and happy to meet you ^^

Hehe, yeah... I'm hardly a week old in macro/micro and still learning each day x3

Thanks for welcoming me and it's good to see many friendly faces.

*Cuddle* ^^

*Ruffles your hair playfully while embracing you softly*

Hehe

I have to say, this is the first time I’ve ever seen music used as a method of size-changing!

Hope to see more of this sort of stuff, and welcome!

Music hits home to me and every so often something is missing... Guess it's just ingrained within me now!

I'll definitely still be around since this is truly a blast!

A pretty interesting take on having a growth spurt, had a nice neat read here, good on ya ^^

Glad ya enjoyed it. Will definitely being more if you're still interested!

I just finished reading and it is a pretty cute story! The music based transformation to growth powers is a meat idea

Aww, thanks for the compliment. Music is its own language, but I guess it's my turn to learn the magic within the symbols.

Very good story, interesting concept to control the size, but very entertaining and fun, I hope to read more adventures of Lumi

I couldn't quite figure out the program until it was too late. I'll be scribbling my adventures and keeping them here for records.

Hopefully you'll enjoy what's to come.

I'm sure yes, keep it up ^w^

Cute story!

Glad a fellow arctic friend like it!

An interesting story. Hope to see more from you if you enjoyed making it.

Hehe, are you kidding!? I loved every second of it haha. Glad you enjoyed it.