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A loving relationship between fox and rabbit gets tested as predatory instinct comes into play, threatening to tear them apart. Will they be able to get through this hurdle and carry on or is their relationship doomed to fall apart?
Happy Valentines Day everyone! Sadly, I couldn't find any foxes in my area come this Valentines Day, so I'll have to settle about writing them instead! I tried a new format of writing for this one with new color coded dialogue and thoughts! Please let me know if you like this better than my old style, and if you find it easier or harder to read.
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A loving relationship between fox and rabbit gets tested as predatory instinct comes into play, threatening to tear them apart. Will they be able to get through this hurdle and carry on or is their relationship doomed to fall apart?
Happy Valentines Day everyone! Sadly, I couldn't find any foxes in my area come this Valentines Day, so I'll have to settle about writing them instead! I tried a new format of writing for this one with new color coded dialogue and thoughts! Please let me know if you like this better than my old style, and if you find it easier or harder to read.
writing it!
(3.3k words)
Category Story / Vore
Species Red Fox
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 131.7 kB
James has acquired EMOTIONAL MATURITY!!! Heck yeah! As a geek who loves world building, I really appreciate the details you embedded into the story. I especially like the idea of a pred/prey-ED and the ancient past of Vezia. I hope it gets explored further. :3
I would've liked slower pacing. more time to let realization and anxiety simmer. also, you missed an opportunity to actually write the article within the story rather than just having the narrarator explain.
HOWEVER I am impressed with the development of the two characters, the self conflict of the fox, the horniness of the rabbit, the trust, i enjoy.
HOWEVER I am impressed with the development of the two characters, the self conflict of the fox, the horniness of the rabbit, the trust, i enjoy.
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