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"No one can hear me scream" (Skillet - Monster)A large-scale, long-form transformation comic for
LeoLeu, about their majestic dragon named Gerhard! /a lot of hard work to do, but I'm really glad I got an opportunity to! :> The pages will be published as they are ready, 4 pages at a time; all links will be gradually made~/
Category Artwork (Digital) / Transformation
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 1626 x 2266px
File Size 4.49 MB
Listed in Folders
Hey, nice work! Love the slow tf so far.
Small things to consider about the grammar, though:
"Do you really afraid even now" -> "Are you really afraid even now?"
This would make it more correct. But, I'd change it to "Are you really afraid, still?"
"Or you just afraid to admit that..." -> "Or are you just afraid to admit that..."
Hope I am not sounding rude, just wanna help out. Anyway, great work, can't wait to see how this turns out!
Small things to consider about the grammar, though:
"Do you really afraid even now" -> "Are you really afraid even now?"
This would make it more correct. But, I'd change it to "Are you really afraid, still?"
"Or you just afraid to admit that..." -> "Or are you just afraid to admit that..."
Hope I am not sounding rude, just wanna help out. Anyway, great work, can't wait to see how this turns out!
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