Barren frontier world being prepped for people? Could've communicated that more, but this was just a something...something, tried some stuff mostly.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Scenery
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Size 1238 x 744px
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Good start yeah. The power-wire structure things on the side of the cliff are very sharp, they have a very high contrast and draw attention (Altough im guessing by the slope that you wanted to move the attention away from them to the mid of the pic?). Making them less distinct would help. Very eyecatching thumbnail on it, good total range of values., The lightsource on the freighter also seems to be coming from its side as well as behind and below it, you could make the whole bottom to the same value (and the top) make the area behind it very bright, really drawing the picture onto it. At the moment it blends a little into the sky above it. Good work tho
Oh! Not often I get real feedback, so thank you! Lets see, I added the power lines because I thought it would add a sense of depth and also a degree of human activity. I didn't really think about how much attention they'd grab, but I will try making them distinct as you say. Though I don't know how. Maybe less black, less framework..not sure. Yes, I agree the ship blends into the background. It looks really flat and I wasn't sure how to make it pop. hence the weird lighting situation, heh. Which one of all all the values on the side are you thinking? The most orange one? Anyway I'll try all the above.
Again, thanks!
Again, thanks!
Hehe. Well the closest powerline thing can be deep dark to look closer, but you can make their edges more fuzzy/soft. Just make them unfocused I guess, and that naturally moves focus away from them. At the moment they are very sharp while the rocks that appear to be in front of them are very blurry. I guess they should have the same ammount of focus?
The ship would pop stronger if you removed some of the clouds behind it so there is no tangent (No clouds touching the ship). Sunlight is pretty easy to work with overall, every plate facing the same direction should have virtually the exact same value. And you could choose which one of the values you want to use. ^^
The ship would pop stronger if you removed some of the clouds behind it so there is no tangent (No clouds touching the ship). Sunlight is pretty easy to work with overall, every plate facing the same direction should have virtually the exact same value. And you could choose which one of the values you want to use. ^^
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