Two songs I wrote. I don't really know what I'm doing but I think they're pretty cool

SONG 1: FALLING

If I were heaven sent, would you love me more
Would you love me enough to care if I break
If I were an angel, would you love me more
Would you love me enough to care when I fall
BUT NO
INSTEAD I AM INFERNAL
AND
THROUGH THIS I AM ETERNAL
MAY THE FLAMES RAIN DOWN ON YOU

I build my kingdom of blood
Unstoppable
Invincible
I see no god above me
Unstoppable
Invincible
I build my army of masks
Unstoppable
Invincible
I see no angels that care
Unstoppable
Invincible
I build my fortress of steel
Unstoppable
Invincible
I see no people that try
Unstoppable
Invincible
I build my crown of hellfire
Unstoppable
Invincible
I see no demons that hide
Unstoppable
Invincible
(Repeat)

SONG 2: BURN

I’m burning down all of the feelings in my brain I scream in to darkness and it starts to give way
I see all the colors in heaven fade to gray
Why is this happening will someone please wake me

ILL
NEVER CONCEDE
NEVER BELIEVE
NEVER GIVE UP SO YOU MIGHT AS WELL GET UP NOW AND LEAVE
YOU
NEVER LOVED ME
NEVER WILL SEE
NEVER WERE THERE TO SHOW YOU CARED ABOUT ME

killings elating when angels are rapeing my sanity’s come to an end
The blood of the minors the innocent liars this dragon has had quite enough

ILL
NEVER CONCEDE
NEVER BELIEVE
NEVER GIVE UP SO YOU MIGHT AS WELL GET UP NOW AND LEAVE
YOU
NEVER LOVED ME
NEVER WILL SEE
NEVER WERE THERE TO SHOW YOU CARED ABOUT ME

(Insert melodic guitar and stuff here)
And the light becomes my friend
The demons meet their end
The chaos settles down
The madman turns around
The skies return to blue
The flowers come to bloom
But evil never dies
The black kings on the rise
He raise his wicked hand
AND IT ALL STARTS OVER AGAIN

ILL
NEVER CONCEDE
NEVER BELIEVE
NEVER GIVE UP SO YOU MIGHT AS WELL GET UP NOW AND LEAVE
YOU
NEVER LOVED ME
NEVER WILL SEE
NEVER WERE THERE TO SHOW YOU CARED ABOUT ME