iv been thinking about doing a project for about a week now, before seeing Zootopia. i went through an idea and that didn't go so well. then i went through another idea, considering if i haven't seen the movie, i would piss off some people who had if i got somethings wrong so it became an original idea in it of itself. it was worse, only cause i got NO RESPONSES. i got some responses when i first patched it out and some were helpful, other made it worse. the second idea, NOBODY GAVE ME A RESPONSE. so if i post it here (cause it'll be exclusive to Furaffinity in the first place) and mabye get some pointers and help me in the right direction before i start on the story.

here the summary of the story:

Nick and Judy were on duty, doing their normal run through of the day until they stopped at a little retailer, since Judy needed a drink. after entering the store they meet one of the cashiers who was really nice towards the two, but always having a nice attitude towards them, Nick wanted to bring the nice fox along with the two of them. having the day spent together after with thier new friend, they were on thier way,  when Judy forgot her phone in the fox's apartment. going to get it, Judy found out that the fox has to what he claims to be missing parents, that he hasn't seen in years. now Nick and Judy must help thier new friend find his parents and restore the connection that the fox has lost.

so any advice or opinions. i would love to hear them.