I was selected to have some chapters read in front of a professional author of young adult fantasy, and adult novels, Richard Scrimger. I got a lot of useful comments on my first three chapters, including one that calls for translation of my text to graphic novel. My art isn't good enough to make the graphic novel work, however, I do know someone who could do the work. Taral Wayne has done a few comic books and many other illustrations for fanzines. Taral has actually illustrated a book by Rudy Rucker, which was some riff on Flatland. There is money to be had, but I am not there yet. I am getting closer, however.